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Tuesday, January 14, 2003 - 4:58pmSanction this postReply
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Hi Matt,

I'm one of those uncultured brutes (or brutesses?) that have no clue about poetry at all but this was kind of nice! Maybe it was just the sexual theme that did for me. LOL!

Now, if you set this to some really awesome music, I could probably enjoy it even more!

Joy :)

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Tuesday, January 14, 2003 - 5:45pmSanction this postReply
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Thanks, Joy! I'm something of an uncultured brute myself, and I'm little better than you when it comes to poetry. I'm glad I wrote this, though, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Tuesday, January 14, 2003 - 9:06pmSanction this postReply
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Great poem, Matt. Do let us know if it gets you that shag...

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Wednesday, January 15, 2003 - 4:21amSanction this postReply
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It has. Often.

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Wednesday, January 15, 2003 - 8:50amSanction this postReply
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I haven't written poetry in ages, but I do know what I like.

I enjoyed your poem, very stirring and arousing. Presents the images and meaning of what sex between lovers should entail.

Jen

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Thursday, January 16, 2003 - 10:44amSanction this postReply
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Thank you, Jen. I'm glad my poem pleased you; when I first submitted it I had worried for a moment that it wasn't nearly as good as I hoped it would be.

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